Past Lives is a Meme which features installments from bloggers around the world writing creative stories about past lives, even possibly their own past lives!Our story starts with a fictional Australian called David. As a last ditch effort trying to resolve his debilitating phobias, he goes through Past Life Regression (PLR) therapy. Join us as we follow David’s experiences through different times and continents.( Our links are listed on the right side of this blog.)
If you are just joining us, please read Part 1 of the story and follow the links at the end of each segment to learn David's progress so far. Please note that you will be traveling to different blogs as each author adds to the evolution of David's journey. (Our links are listed on the right side of this blog)
Past Lives Part 6-
Lying back, I watch the ghostly tongues of light from the lamps playing on the ornamental ceiling and feel my heart beat ever more slowly. I close my eyes and give myself over to it. I count the timpani of each spasm of that engine of life between shallow breaths with fingers on a clammy hand.
Slower now...I count...41........42..........43................44...........................
“WHAT? WHO SAID THAT? WHO THE HELL IS COUNTING?"
"SHUTUP, ALREADY!
HENRY ! HENRY ! WHAT IS THAT INFERNAL NOISE? HENRY ! ”
I’m loosing my flipping mind! They go up and down and up and down those damn stairs! My ceiling caving in! I’m so sick of listening to them. My head’s gonna explode. What is it with those jerks? It goes on day and night! How’d ya like a bullet up your…..
That’s what I get for being such a nice guy. Just call me Frank Zane the Chump! I’m 1924’s World Class Sitting Duck for any would be scam! I can’t believe him!
‘Just a few people’, he said!
‘You wont even know we’re here,’ he said!
‘ Just a little meeting place,' he said!
Then he sets up the” Glory Road Temperance Revival’ - in my Speak Easy! And that music! They sound like a horde of flappers stomping and hollering like buzzards! He’s got the whole city of Chicago. There’s a million Speak Easies! Why me? Why my club.
I’m loosing my flipping mind! They go up and down and up and down those damn stairs! My ceiling caving in! I’m so sick of listening to them. My head’s gonna explode. What is it with those jerks? It goes on day and night! How’d ya like a bullet up your…..
That’s what I get for being such a nice guy. Just call me Frank Zane the Chump! I’m 1924’s World Class Sitting Duck for any would be scam! I can’t believe him!
‘Just a few people’, he said!
‘You wont even know we’re here,’ he said!
‘ Just a little meeting place,' he said!
Then he sets up the” Glory Road Temperance Revival’ - in my Speak Easy! And that music! They sound like a horde of flappers stomping and hollering like buzzards! He’s got the whole city of Chicago. There’s a million Speak Easies! Why me? Why my club.
Henry- “ Mr. Zane?”Zane- “Jez Henry! What’s the matter with you? Do you have to come slamming in the door like that? Ever heard of knocking? I could have a hard attack -you idiot! I’m going to put a bell around your neck Henry! Then I’ll know when your coming. What do you want?”
Henry- “You called for me, Mr. Zane.”
Zane- “What is that moron doing up there? I can’t hear myself think!”
Henry- “They’re moving Mr. Zane. You told them to get out and they’re moving. They’re trying to get their piano….……..”
Zane- “Shutup! Get up there and help em. Make it quick! I want them outta here now!”
Man, they can’t even leave without torturing me! If he thinks he’s going to snare my customers over to his ‘holy rolling righteous calling’- he’s got another thing coming. And he calls me a gangster. Threatens me with the cops! I’ll show him ‘gangster’. Yeah! I’ll give him a reason to scream ‘cop’.
I’m just trying to make a livin’ like everyone else. Prohibition fool! It’s every man’s right to drink! It’s every man’s right to drink himself to death he wants to. I’m just providing a service- like any other service. And my broads are just waitresses! Anybody can see that. So they date the customers. It’s free Democracy! As long as they share their tips with me, what do I care? He needs to worry about his own soul. Accidents happen. He’s not going to get the best of Frank Zane! No he’s not!
Zane- “Isn’t that right kitty? Come here baby. I love you, Simon. Yes I do. You want some milk? Daddy will get it for you. Yes, he will.”“There you go my little bumpkin. You’re the only one that understands Daddy. You’re my best friend Simon. Yes, you are. I bet you miss Lillabeth, huh? So do I, but she was scratching up Daddy’s furniture. She was a very bad kitty. That’s why Daddy had to shoot her. You understand don’t you? You would never scratch Daddy’s furniture, would you Simon? You’re such good kitty. Yes, you are.”
Zane- “Henry! Get in here! Henry! Where are you?”That good for nothin’. I’m gonna fire him! Janitors come a dime a dozen. I’m sick of his ten children hard luck sob story. He’s got mouths to feed! What about my mouth? He gets paid when I get paid. Everybody wants a free ride! What now? What’s all that racket! It sounds like the buildings coming apart. Man, I’ve gotta get out there and see what the hell’s going on.
What an idiot! He can’t do anything! Would you look at that! I can’t believe that dimwit’s gonna lower that piano down on a pulley! The thing weighs a ton and look at those rat chewed ropes! The bricks are falling…. he’s tearing up the my whole building!!!
Zane- “You stupid idiot! Are you crazy? Look what you’re doing! What’s the matter with you? Get that thing off those ropes and push it down the stairs! You’re going to pay for this Henry! It’s coming out of your paycheck! Do you hear me, Henry? ”
Henry from the roof- “Hey boss! Don’t stand right under it! Move outta the way. Please, Boss! If it drops…..”
Zane- “Shut-up! Get that thing off of that rope right now!
Henry- “As you wish, Mr. Zane.”
CRASH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Stop!
To read PART 7 in David's Journey you will be traveling to Texas, U.S.A. on Friday, 7/25.
David's PLR story is purely fictional. If there are any bloggers in any part of the world who would like to participate in David's story by writing about a 'past life' in a time, place and country you are familiar with, please contact us at lillyslife@gmail.com or The Red Chair Gallery Blog.
The Photos are from AOL collections of Prohibition Photos/ Not for resale/ Copyright 2008. My drawing of Frank Zane is Charcoal on Paper. To see more of my Art Work please visit The Red Chair Gallery.







20 comments:
I am so in awe. Your Art. Your mind and imagination. Your writing.
I'm gonna start looking for a house in Utah.
Thanks Lou,
I’ve always heard actors say it’s actually more fun to play the bad guy. It’s also a lot of fun to write one. The worst part of it is, we’ve all known a Frank Zane at one time or another. I once had a boss like him. A little exaggerated…but close.
Hugs,
Vikki
Another brilliant work of art and writing. It would take me at least two weeks to come up with something like this. And still be not as great as yours. I'm still mulling of what and how to write the next chapter for my novel.
Vikki, thanks for taking the time to explain to me about David and the meme. Anyway, I feel honored to be asked to join in your meme. I accept the challenge, but I won't be able to submit one right away. So mine will be for later, if that's okay. This way, it will give me time to write. Have a great day.
Hi Tasha,
Thanks for your comments. I’m very happy you want to do a story. I assure you once you get into it, it’s a lot easier, quicker than you think. It’s also a lot of fun. The characters and places are simple and don’t have to be defined to the inth degree. Just enough to get the idea of who they are and when.
Let us know when you’re ready and we'll send you our format you’ll need to include. We presently have four (?) more writers already scheduled to publish over the next two weeks.
Vikki
Another fabulous, fabulous story. You have such a wonderful imagination and the story is perfect Frank had it coming! Shooting a kitty indeed! I like what you did with Simon also...it will be interesting to see what happens with him too along the journey.Your charcoal drawing is amazing and Frank looks so, so familiar...I also like the picture placed at the top of the post makes you wonder who the character could be and adds to the suspense. I so love the 20s.
Thanks Lilly,
Poor David. Will he ever figure it out? I'm sure you noticed he was the cause of his own demise in Part 5. David, David, David. He's taken a turn and seems to be visiting his seamy Past Lives now. The saga continues.
Vikki
I love the picture, it adds so much to the story. I too love the 20's, such and "eventful" time. Being an animal lover, I have to agree with Lilly, he had it coming.
Yes I have known many people like Frank, and they do seem to be the cause of their own demise. I wonder if David feels any connection to his prior persona's yet.
This is going to be fun, but I agree with Tasha, it will take more effort for me. I have to think, contemplate, and scribble. Have already started, and having fun with it too. Thanks for the opportunity.
Hi Eric,
Thanks. Yes- I wanted to make the readers hate Frank Zane and cheer when he died. I cheered.
I had first made a drawing of a mean looking character. But, it just seemed like it was taking it to far. Frank is self absorbed sleeze bag that blames others for his problems- not a psycho. So I came up with this character, made him a bit humorous and more applicable to the written character.
I’m really looking forward to your story. Have fun.
Vikki
Vikki,
What a great story, you can certainly pop out a story and a drawing in nothing flat! You've got a wild imagination, an smart as a whip!
Chris,
Oh, stop smarty-pants. My ego bubbles to a crest.
Frank was fun one to write. He’s just a selfish old curmudgeon and doesn’t get that it’s ‘him’- not everyone else.
Vikki
Well dog gonnit Vikki!
I can't believe you, what a plethora of talent!
Did you draw the picture first and then write about him? I think the sketch was spot on! He looks exactly like what I expected.
I love the story! I can tell you have Kitties by the way Frank talks to his... (only animal lovers can relate) bahhahahah
I agree with Lilly, he had it coming!
Touche' my friend. Job very very well done!!
((big ol Texas HUG))
Love the expression on Zane's face - his eyes.
Great piece!
Honoured by your invitation to participate Vicki. Would love to but now my heart is racing at the thought of trying to write again. My creative juices dried up through lack of use years ago.
How soon would you need it?
This is so great, Vikki! So much talent . . . you're amazing. I wish I could participate, but so many addictions, so little time!!!
Hi Jules,
The story came first then I drew the portrait. I had actually drawn a different character that just didn’t fit for Frank . So I started over and came up with this chubby face charater.
Yes I am a major animal lover. I love my kitties. They're my substitute babies now that my kids are grown.
Vikki
Hi Tash,
I felt exactly the same way. I couldn’t remember when I last just set down and made up a story. The fact they’re so short, it’s actually fun and (I promise) not a big deal. We have people asking to do a second character now. I assure you it’s really invigorating once you get in to it. There are so methods and means of ‘killing’ poor David!
We have new stories scheduled for all next week. So there’s lots of time to think about it. You tell us when it’s convenient for you and we’ll work it out.
Vikki
Hi Martha,
No feeling obliged allowed!!! I just wanted you to see the mischief we’ve been up to and get a chuckle or two.
I know you have your own Recycling Art project going on daily right now. I’m really enjoying it. I just did apiece based on some of the tricks you’ve taught me that I otherwise would never have tried.
Talk to you soon,
Vikki
Vikki!
You minx! How blessedly perverse having Zane shoot a cat named 'Lillabeth'! You've got a devilish streak in you as well! I loved this character - stinky but also a bit lovable (look at that pudgy baby face and that sidelong glance)!
And I just laughed at how you segued Hugh's self-induced syonara into Lou's temper tantrum! Did NOT want to throttle you!
I'm going to whip up another one or so either this evening or tomorrow when I can put down my textile piece that I'm working on.
BT Hugs,
D
PS-I also fixed the lineation from my part 5 to your 6.
PS! I almost forgot to tell you! Donna Jean Thomas-Jackson is my oldest friendship - 56 years! My maternal grandfather her dad used to make a living running homemade moonshine between the outskirts of Tampa and parts east during prohibition.
They used a Model T Ford with two gas tanks - one for gas, the other for booze.
There were these concrete statues of circus animals along Route 60, then just a dirt road. They would hide the bottles in those for their customers to pick up.
Once when the revenuers where chasing them, my grandpa bailed out of the car leaving Marvin on his own. Granddaddy hide inside the but of a pink concrete elephant - cross my heart!
Zane reminded me so much of those two!
D
Oh Dina,
You made me laugh so hard.I just couldn’t help myself. It was just an open door.
You know it’s one of those scenes where everything is so morose, quiet and sad and some jerk sticks his neck up and screams –“Hey! What’s going on?”
That always cracks me up! I still laugh thinking about it.
I loved the name Lillabeth and absolutely agree more than I can tell you. There is no more haneous human being than someone who hurts or kills an animal-especailly one named Lillabeth! I had to make them hate Frank. He was a hateful person. As you can see from the comments, everybody's glad when he gets it in the end.
That's really cool about your grandfather. When, if you have the time would you detail that for me more? I would really love to paint that scene. I love your description.
Vikki
Wonderful story Vikki and such a wonderful drawing!!! I agree, he sure had it coming!.... I've too met people like that.... my family is Italian (from the north of Italy) and my parents had friends from Naples and Sicily, so I grew up in that friendly "mafia" kind of environment with one just like Frank... not fun!
I really enjoyed the stories so far, can't wait to see what poor David would have to remember next!
Hi Manuela.
Thank you for your comments.
You know-I love hearing about your background. You just give me little hints here and there. I wish you’d consider doing a blog piece on your family. (Think about it.)
And your right about Frank not being unique. I’ve also known people like him. I think everyone has. After reviewing my comments, I think Frank getting his due demise was just a little bit cathartic for all of us. We’ve all known someone that definitely needs a piano dropped on them.
Vikki
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